Does anyone have any advice on my book?(preview and answer quick so I can continue)?
Ok my last question’s format was kind of messed up: so here you go guys.
For My Book Character/Story Line/new novel:
What is a nice Scandinavian/American last name?
What is a good middle name for a girl named Delilah (her nickname is Lay)?
What would be a good middle/last name for John (he’s Irish)?
Description of John:
Lay’s boyfriend
Good Looking
a year older than Lay
freckled
almost always blushing
gets bad sunburn
very country like
always wears old t shirts and jeans
like motorcycles, fast cars, playing guitar and leather jewelry (necklaces/bracelets)
nationalities: Irish
very tall (6 foot 4)
muscular
dirty blonde hair blue eyes(strong jaw structure)
not popular at all at school
sensitive, courageous, relaxing, affectionate loyal and trustworthy, charming
previous question:
Update to:
What would be a good IM screen name and full mame (first, middle, last) for this book character?(answer fast)?
Basics:
name:? Delilah (middle and last name)
age:15-18
appearance: long brown haired, blue eyed, average height but petite with pixie like features, pale skin
characteristics: sarcastic, imaginative, intelligent, mysterious, beautiful, loyal.
more info:
likes: reading, writing, field hockey, ,singing in the shower, music, acoustic guitar, her laid back boyfriend john, being awake late at night and early in the morning, snow, race cars
random facts:
she wears leather jackets and skirts all the time
she enjoys long bike rides
she’s somewhat outdoorsy
she doesn’t have a ton of friends
she appreciates art
please help me, the whole IM thing is a big part of the book.
She is Scandinavian (Finland, Sweden, Norway, Denmark, and Iceland.)
All answers are appreciated .
Additional Details :
I need an IM screen name as well, it is a very important part of the story line and as soon as I get this information I can start so please answer quickly.
The truth is a more of a realistic story (not about vampires.)The story is actually about Delilah and her beloved boyfriend, John who dies in a motorcycle accident, when this happened (since their two families were friends, they split up and moved to two totally different places when she moves she is stuck in a high school where she knows no one and has a hard time getting use to this new place. She starts spending a lot of time online so one day a strange name IMs her…the.boy020107 and the thing that is so strange about it is that the numbers were the exact date her boyfriend died on, in this situation she becomes lost and confused and eventually finds a new friend.
I have decided for the IM address it is wearing_his_tee.shirt05
haven’t decided on a name I think I’m going to make it Delilah so John can call her Lay how does that sound? Have any middle and last name suggestions for the both of him?
Preview:
The first time Delilah and John met was their life snapshot. The Kansas sun shined above in the pristine blue sky. The navy blue lake glimmered back and the water stood at stand-still. The girl stripped of her t-shirt and sunglasses and dived off the old wooden dock. Snap! With her black- bikini-clad body in mid air in a graceful dive position, John watched and studied the new girl in town. There he sat, inches away from the lake on the hot grass, getting sprinkled with warm lake water watching her come up and gasp for air. As Delilah’s eyes adjusted they focused on the boy her age staring at her. She smiled nervously before pulling herself out of the water.
That night Delilah nearly finished unpacking. Moving from Suffield, Connecticut to a name, Kansas had been one of the most difficult times of her life. Moving here would be like starting over for Delilah, like a new life without the Suffield Academy tigers at her side. Just before Delilah was about to slice open the last cardboard box her mother called from downstairs. “It’s time to go to dinner with the neighbors, sweetie.”
“And make sure you look nice,” my dad added from the back of the house.
“Who are we going to see?”
“Some old friends ours, actually they have a boy that’s your age.”
(also if you have any ideas for the story at all or questions IM me at loyal.to_ryan (yahoo messenger) or email me at saving.ryans_private_life@yahoo.com)
Okay, first…a girl named Lay??? How about Dell? I thinnk that would have been a better nickname for a girl. I’m thinking sexual connotations that could be seen in the nickname. If she has a brain - you might have a problem. As far as a far as a last name Scan/American - how about Hansen?
An Irish middle name for John could be Patrick or Sean. An Irish last name would be anything that has "Mc" in it, such as John Patrick McMahon.
As far as an IM name for the female character - I’d rethink that nickname still. I know it might be hard because no doubt that character is "Lay" to you. Think child molesters, etc.
Hope this helps.
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Okay, first…a girl named Lay??? How about Dell? I thinnk that would have been a better nickname for a girl. I’m thinking sexual connotations that could be seen in the nickname. If she has a brain - you might have a problem. As far as a far as a last name Scan/American - how about Hansen?
An Irish middle name for John could be Patrick or Sean. An Irish last name would be anything that has "Mc" in it, such as John Patrick McMahon.
As far as an IM name for the female character - I’d rethink that nickname still. I know it might be hard because no doubt that character is "Lay" to you. Think child molesters, etc.
Hope this helps.
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